Name: Kairi
Age: 17
Race: human
Side:good
Weapon/Strategi:Hand-to-Hand combat, Dull gold staff
Description:long raven black hair, dark brown hair, a very baggy white sweater with blue trimming, black jeans, brown boots with a gold buckle.
History:unknown
(is it better?)

waiting :!:

There's not much to go on to form an opinion. We're not geared towards open combat and what not. It almost seems as if you are looking for something geared more towards Mortal Kombat, which is fine. That's just not us. The most important part of your bio (at least as far as I am concerned), the history, is unknown. In this world, a 17 year old with a dull gold staff will most likely get ignored outright by a vampire. If she were to make the mistake of attacking one with said dull gold staff, she'd probably get her ass handed to her on a silver platter and find herself turned into a ghoul for her trouble. Just one mangina's opinion....

Perhaps you've missed the point that this is a Vampire guild, based around the role playing game Vampire: The Masquerade, published by White Wolf. What we do here is a sort of combination of collaborative fiction and role-play.

Try reading some of the many fine stories that people have written and maybe you'll see what we are about.